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Life is like an old computer;
At the beginning
You are constantly discovering
New and exciting things about it
As you and it mature together
You fill it with your
And a million other things
That document your life.
Then things start breaking;
All signs that you should be
Signs pointing out that you really
Should get an upgrade
This piece of plastic and metal
Has
Become a part of you
Holding a piece of your mind
Within the Wires
Then suddenly one day
Seemingly without warning
You go to turn it on
And all you hear is a
Wir
Sizzle
Crackle
Fizzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz...
The screen stays Black
The revving of the small motor
Is not to be heard
Suddenly
At the click of a button
All of those
That have been so carefully documented
Snuffed out of existence from
Too much loving attention
Burnt out from
Over use
And thus
Life is but a collection of these
Are carefully recorded
In your brain.
Then things
Parts of you
Begin to break
Not quite functioning
The way they used to;
Then one day
Seemingly without warning
Within these few brief seconds
All of your
That have been so carefully stored
As if they never were
Everything you are fades
From over use
At the beginning
You are constantly discovering
New and exciting things about it
As you and it mature together
You fill it with your
Hopes
Dreams
Ideas
Thoughts
Memories
And a million other things
That document your life.
Then things start breaking;
The disk tray refuses to open
The keys stick
The mouse lags
All signs that you should be
Carefully Noting
Signs pointing out that you really
Should get an upgrade
But
This piece of plastic and metal
Has
In a sense
Become a part of you
Holding a piece of your mind
Within the Wires
Cablesand Chips
Then suddenly one day
Seemingly without warning
You go to turn it on
And all you hear is a
Wir
Sizzle
Crackle
Fizzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz...
The screen stays Black
The revving of the small motor
Is not to be heard
Suddenly
At the click of a button
All of those
Hopes
Dreams
Ideas
Thoughts
Memories
That have been so carefully documented
Are gone.
Snuffed out of existence from
Too much loving attention
Burnt out from
Over use
And thus
A piece of you
Dies.
Life is but a collection of these
Hopes
Dreams
Ideas
Thoughts
Memories
Are carefully recorded
In your brain.
Then things
Parts of you
Begin to break
Not quite functioning
The way they used to;
Fingers ache
Eyes blur
Ears ring
Back bends
Skin shrivelsBody
Slows
D o w n
Then one day
Seemingly without warning
Heart. Stops.
Breath. Stops.
Brain. Powers. Down.
Body. lives.
No. More.
Within these few brief seconds
All of your
Hopes
Dreams
Ideas
Thoughts
Memories
That have been so carefully stored
Are gone.
As if they never were
Everything you are fades
From over use
And so
You Die.
~Lux
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This is not really related to the other one (life is...). I wrote this for a class I was in, and the death of my old computer inspired it. As I'm sure you can tell, it was a little on the depressing side as it stunted my ability to write as freely as I do. I have yet to retrieve the information off of it, but I now have a new laptop, so I'm happy.
anyway, Enjoy as you will, comment if you like.
~Lux
anyway, Enjoy as you will, comment if you like.
~Lux
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A lovely metaphor, beautifully written!!